TELEVISION PROGRAMS WORTH WACHING
Television is vey important for people.Television effects people life so people be careful to choose TV program.People learn nearly all news,knowledge in television.Furthermore some people pass good time with television.However a little program worth watching.Three of the more successful programs are documentary, cartoon, sports programs.
One succesful program is documentary,which teach nearly all important knowledge.A person who wach documentary develop myself and know other culture, country.Documentary explain a lot of subjects.This subjects are animal’s life, old culture, naturel life, other culture and country. Documentary’s producer make a lot of researchs, watching wild life, go distant country for documentary.Sometime a person who documentary’s producer can meet died because they see lion, tiger and other wild animals.
Second successful program is cartoon which useful for children.Cartoon teach important knowledge to children.For example numbers, colours, some letters.On the other hand a person who children’s mother and father be careful choose cartoon.Because some cartoon negative effect.A lot of cartoon shows animals fall down to high but animal not died.A children who see animals not died can jump to window.
A third successful program is sports programs which tie our culture and other culture.Sports which provide to one person helpful,peace.Person who make sports healthy,nimble. May be peoples learn ancestor’s sports thanks to sports program.Sports want make people who watch sports program.
To sum up television effects and change our life. So we be careful as choose television program.Especially this program which teach a lot of knowledge and develop myself.
not pass time but spend nice time
YanıtlaSilyour thesis is really successful, I like your introduction paragraph. you have topic sentences for body paragraphs. and you have a nice content.
there are some grammar mistakes but I didn't correct them, because they didnt prevent my understanding.
in conclusion paragraph is nice but ı think, it is very short.
YanıtlaSilı like your bodies.Because,you support with example.
I think. you mention general topic but your essay is nice.