PREP CLASS
A lot of universities have prep class education in their programme.Prep class is obligatory in a lot of universities.Students learn English,German and other languages in prep class.A lot of students think that prep class shouldn’t be obligatory however, I think prep class should be obligatory for three reasons.
The first reason is different language,especially English most important for work life,Some compaines use English for interview and meetings.The number of countries which use English in work life has increased in the last years.According to research,approximately 70% of countries speak English in the world.A lot of young people who look for a job, go to a course to learn English and they spend a lot of money,but prep class is cheaper than a course.
The second reason is that prep class is useful for abroad.A lot of people go to different countries for job career.When we go abroad,we will speak foreign language,so we should learn foreign language.We learn foreign language in prep class,so prep class is very important for me.
The third reason is that prep class is very relaxing and nice,because we have got a lot of free time, so we make a lot of activities, go to some courses and develop ourself.Furthermore,we learn the city we live in.
To sum up, everyone who is a university student should go to attend prep class,because prep class effect our life in several ways.Separately one proverb said”One language one person,two language two person”so we learn a lot of languages to this firstly with prep class.
I like your introduction.
YanıtlaSilyour first and second reason are connected to each other. they could be written under one topic, learning language.
you can say, in prep class students learn language. this is useful for going abroad ... enlish is used by many countries ...
your topics can be arranged in better ways.
also your content is not enough in your third body.
ın your conclusion paragraph, you only talk about languages, what about your third topic?
I liked too your introduction but, you used same words such as prep school, obligatory. Also, I agree with Yelda teacher because first and second body pharaphs are similer. You might write together both of them. Conclusion pha... I liked. it was good :)
YanıtlaSilI wrote some words such as paragraph and smilar. now I corrected :)
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