TWO GREAT CITIES
Becoming a student has given me the opportunity in two cities at the same time:Denizli and İstanbul.Living in each city has let me see many differences between both, but there are three main contrasts between them,which are location ,social life,job opportunities.
The first difference is location.İstanbul is by the sea,so people go to the cost and they are very relaxed.However Denizli hasn’t got sea and it is very hot.If Denizli had got sea,peoplewould go sea and they be relax.On the one hand İstanbul is nearby a lot of important places.For example Edirne,Greece…This people,who live in İstanbul,do many places easly.But Denizli is distant to many important places.On the other hand İstanbul has got a lot of historical places.İstanbul has got good location compared with Denizli.
The second difference is social life.Dancing,playing courses are in İstanbul so people go to these courses and they develop themselves.However Denizli has got a few courses and this courses teach unimportant knowledge.Besides, İstanbul has got a lot of cafes.People go these cafes and they have fun.On the other hand,İstanbul has got a lot of sports activites but Denizli has a few sport activities.
The final difference is job opportunities.İstanbul is very big city and it has got a lot of companies so people find job quickly.Unlike İstanbul,Denizli is small and has got a few companies so people find job difficult.
To sum up,İstanbul is greater city than Denizli.İstanbul has got a lot of possibilties.People who live in İstanbul spend nice time and they get happy.Denizli is also beautiful but it is very small city.When we considerball their features,İstanbul is more outstanding because of it’s great location,colourful social life and diversity of job opportunities.
topic is very good especially I like conclusion.However The third paragraph was a little short.you could have examples of the third paragraph.For example:example: the business center of Istanbul So there are so many company's headquarters in Istanbul such as, mudo,biltur etc. I liked the essay in general :)
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